OK guys, I may be becoming too critical, but I am still not sure about this track.
I am currently on mixing foundations, so I have done this as my first 'educated' mix. I have created links to my original version of the track before I had any professional tuition. I hope I have improved it somehow?
Original (pre MMWA)
So far (still private on soundcloud until I get the green light here!!)
Both have been mastered over at LANDR as I haven't got onto the mastering yet. My aim is by the end of the year when I will have finished Next Level Mixing and Mastering then the whole thing will be me, rather than robots! No offence to robots, it would just be great to think I could do the whole thing from choosing and manipulating the kick drum to mastering the end product.
Please give honest feedback. If you love it, that's great, but what am I missing? I have uploaded it to learn and improve. I do appreciate that part of that learning may also be to 'stop over analysing things!'