Looking for Feedback on Rock Track


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Hi Everyone,

Would anyone be able to lend an ear on this track I am doing for a Craft Beer Company? I am looking for ways to make it sound more professional and translate well on different systems (TVs and Tablet).

Here is it:

https://soundcloud.com/jacobmfriedman/seismic-damage-v1/s-U9HWE

I really value all of your advice. I often read this forum and learn a lot!

thank you! Jacob